Score: 6
"Eh.."
date: June 17, 2009
The kick is too loud. Distorts the sounds A LOT. The melody isnt that bad but right now it isnt dance-y....more of like a traveling song. So speed up the BPM if ya wanted it to be dance-y. THen just change some of the drums they are a bit annoying. (Just the sounds not the actual way they are done)
Then just either shorten it or change it up a bit. Because its the same melody non-stop the entire way through. So change it up, add a counter melody, whatever.
So change all that and it would be an 8 or 9 depending on how its done. until then....
6/10 3/5