I recommend you listen to this on headphones.
At 3:42, this is my longest song. I recently got some much better software to make music with (Audacity sucks for music), and it let me make the song a lot longer. Hopefully it's creepy and atmospheric, as opposed to annoying.
(Thanks to Onyx for the vocals)
Either intro or outro
This has the effect you went for, but it's far too gentle and simple (albeit, using many components) to be anything other than signifying the begging or end of something, be it a film, a character's life or an album.
Still kinda nice.
Um, thanks, although if you like a song you should probably give it a rating higher than 5 out of 10. Just saying.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Snooglebum 
