Score: 8
"Not bad :)"
date: July 3, 2009
I liked the overall song, you did a good job covering the whole song and not just recording a little part of the song, kudos.
Though I noticed some imperfections in the song especially about the guitar. You know the chords and you have a nice right hand technique (assuming you are right-handed) but you seem to have some difficulties to chain up the chords, that caused tempo and rhythm movement. That's the major point you could improve here.
You voice wasn't excellent but it fitted the guitar quite well and as Haggard pointed out previously you created an interesting ambiance. A strange and dark ambiance, like the overall Pink Floyd ambiance. One more thing, you could have added the slide guitar's licks, even on your acoustic; it would have made the song more catchy and complete.
Overall, I liked it. The simplicity of it surprised me in a good way although you still have to improve some things, the rhythm and the linking of the chords especially. Good job :).
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