((( DECENT )))

It was decent but needs more work, more time and abit of depth to make it more quality, nice job though...

~X~

You need a band!

This would be good if you had a band. Double kicks 'n' all. The quality could be better but it's not as worse as mine :P. It'd make a goodish song but it's pretty crap if it's just the riff. Get a band together or downlad some audio composing tools.

(honest)

To be honest I didnt even finish listening to it. I thought it was a nice try dude. You need a bit more practice, and a better recording source. It sounded like someone who just picked up a guitar, and eventually played something he thought went well. But yeah man, A bit more practice then resubmit it when it sounds better ;)