good work
i like it bro, i think the speed change, i can deal with the pitch cuz i think it works with the flow better. nice work mayn, keep it up
[LM]
The beat is by SilverGorilla titled "Alien Rolling Hy [LM]"
So i know this girl
She walks alone in this world
She walks into the night staring low
She keeps going but theres nowhere to go
She feels slow
n 1 of her thoughts broke
so on she goes thru ya mind
u try n see wuts inside
But see thats been left behind
in her last fight
Ever since then
she never fought herself again
An eye for an eye
n she needs 2 see her friend
so she goes, goes on inside,
inside a mind Inside mine
she needed a lift
so I gave her a ride
Nowhere to go so we hide
cuz we cant run a life
Run into trouble
but we aint pullin to no side
jus pushin edges to light,
pushin day n night
So I know this boy
He walks hand in hand enjoy
He walks the days
staring high
He curse the ways
of the sky
Theres worse
but there's no patience
So the mind is twisted
n out of it since
He cant hide wishes
on stars of the night
Yet again alone
he looks for his sight
Things feel wrong
in the cold world
This boy waits again
to see this girl
The joy he gets
as she passes by
The thought of it
snatches all light
From the image
of his mind
Till no1 sees him
so he hides
He hides in hopes
to find
This girl in his mind
What he doesnt know
is this girl is inside
PS obviously the pitch was raised, I felt it sounded much nicer faster=D
good work
i like it bro, i think the speed change, i can deal with the pitch cuz i think it works with the flow better. nice work mayn, keep it up
[LM]
thanks again 4 the beat man=D good shit=)
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Not bad...
Alright, I dont give much props to artists who use filters/edits to adjust their voice to make music, anyone with the right computer program could make music. That being said, this track is interesting, the high pitch alteration sounds fuckin wicked :D Please don't get accustomed to FX'n your voice with artificial bullshit, thats fake. The beat is insane, Im diggin the chanting, nice work to SilverGorilla. Nice experimentation dude, keep it up (except rely on natural skill, not computing ability, haha) peace
I agree sir, I don't like effects, other than maybe chorus's or small parts to make a point. But the beat sounded much nicer n the girl sounded younger with high pitch=)
anyway
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Fresh...
As always you got some thought in your lyrics and even though you increased the pitch it sounded like your flow was a little more on point then usual, nice man keep up the good work.
lol, it's jus me getting better, but the pitch helped make it sound nicer especially since it increased the pace of the beat n the girl's voice sounds younger=D
thanks 4 the review man
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
pretty solid
liked the beat and flows were pretty good on this one. keep at it!
=) lmfao, sounds madd pussy tho wit high pitch. I dno i think its tight tho
Cool
Nice flow, nice beats, Cool song. 9/10, 4/5. Keep flowin!
=D thanks man
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.