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Heya Newgrounders, this is my first song, made it with FL studio's demo. I have absolutely no clue if you'll like it or not, I don't have much experience with FL studio, but I give it a try! I appreciate every constructive comment you will leave (please do), thanks and enjoy!!

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Average Score: 10.0 / 10

Score: 10

"^_^"

by: LokiKun

date: June 14, 2009

me again XD i like it but work on not making the beats so random make the beats smooth a flow-like. try this next time make a fast paced beat with a consistent melody not random beats. ~loki

June 15, 2009

Author's Response:

hmmm, I'm trying to figure what you mean by random....care to enlighten me?
thx for the comment though ;)

-Lavitz

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Score: 10

"very professional!"

by: Jabicho

date: June 14, 2009

Man, it's great for a techno piece, the changes for the different parts are great and the title fits the piece the good thing is that it doesn't get repetitive, so the piece is great, thanks for sharing!

June 14, 2009

Author's Response:

aaaahh thanks a loooot Jabicho, I knew you had a great taste lol XD (just joking, I'm not throwing flowers to myself) I appreciate it.

thanx ;)
-Lavitz

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Score: 10

"Pretty good for your first song"

by: fosterCHILD16

date: June 13, 2009

Hey long time since we've communicated huh? haha well im glad to see you're making music now and this song definitely shows some promise. I would suggest making the build up at the beginning a little shorter, it develops in a good order but i feel like its just a tiny bit too long. I would also adjust the transition at 1:19 (i think there) it feels like it jumps a bit too quick there but all in all not too bad.

peace
-fosterCHILD

June 13, 2009

Author's Response:

Hey Foster!
like I said I'm still a beginner and I was expecting stuff to be wrong in the song ;)
I'll be sure that I won't do the same mistake in the next songs I make (at least try lol), cuz I can't retouch that song since it's only the demo, no save, only render :(. I appreciate the comment =D.

thanx ;)
-Lavitz