should of...

im gonna be honest here the beginning was sounding good an sounded like someone would rise up from the ashes like a phoenix but soon as it hit 00:26 it just lost its flavor an everything there was not alot into it...if you kept the soft part or increased it with something more fierce in it then i would of enjoyed it more other then that i enjoyed the 24seconds instead of the rest an also work on the timing it was off abit you need to remake it or fix it up simple as that it be perfect for something im working on so it would be useful...its got that touch that im lookin for...

good

it was not bad.but it wasent amazing eighther

so it dezerves an 8

:)

i like pie

do you?

i do

XD

pie

Need to work on timing

Up the pace a little more maybe and keep in timer better and this song would be much better