Score: 8
"An overall good song"
date: November 1, 2009
Hey its me again! tho you probably never heard of me, this song is at the top of the ambient top list so i just had to submit a review. and like it or not this song sint perfect. even tho it sends chills down your body, you cant denie that there are ways to make it beter. this is an ambient song, so its not very complicated = short reviews so just because it aint as long as the other ones doesnt mean i didnt try to review it. im still giving it my best shot.
The oppening: 9/10
Great build up that isnt to sutle to keep the atmospher going. but i think you could of started by puting the pad at 0:16 a little softer and gradualy put it louder and louder.
The Melody: 8/10
This a good melody because of the piano that practicly never repeats itself during the whole 4 minute track witch gives it a feeling that the song changes from beggining to end. but i think you should of took full advantage of this and maed it louder then the vox because it really should be the star of the track.something that could of also helped this track is a slow but powerfull drum loop. a tip is to make it gradually apeare through about 15 seconds of looping, gradually seting the mod x from max negetive to neutral.
The Ending: 7/10
I hate to make this my song but i just thought it might sound really beter if the part at 3:38 to 3:41 when the piano repeates itself that the piano play alone without the pad this would really give it a great feel.
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