Good start

I like how the beginning starts out but I dont like the crackling drum roll you can find way better sounds that that. I like the guitar but you could also take this to another level and switch up the whole sound with this beat. Possibly nylon Guitar mixed with choir, keep the beat but at some ambience in the background to keep the mood flowing. The beginning is a good start for that it this song takes a complete turn from the soft beginning and sounds more like techno. If you do try nylon guitar see if you can possibly distort it a little to get the same feeling.

I dont know my opinion is all over and sorry bout that...theres just a lot of things you could do with this....and also the ending is blah if you can call that an ending, Try using a soft bell at the end that fades out or something that can stretch for at least 4 seconds and fade it out. The stop is just to sudden for me.

Good luck and keep submitting

Nice

I think the whole concept of the song is very good. What are the notes? I might want to experiment with something like this. Nice guitar synth part at the end. It sounds good, despite being a synth. I think a change of drums would be good. I think it'd be better for the song, if you intend on it looping. Great work on the beginning of it.

I think the beginning of the guitar synth stuff should've been done with feedback. It is much softer and better for ambience, and would make way for the synths later on. It'd also be better for it to be an octave lower.

Rather soothing.

It's a very well put togeteher piece, until the guitar or synth at :54.

It made my ears hurt, you need to choose a better instrument.

Never the less.

6/10
5/5