Score: 8

"__REVIEW FROM CONTEST__"

by: FatKidWitAJetPak

date: August 11, 2009

FINAL SCORE - 80 *averaged from all judges scores*

As soon as I entered this page on the audio portal, I said WOW because of how well you did the truckers voice. The length was juuusstt right because I started to not pay attention after the last second. I was laughing at every turn, especially at the part where he said he was a sandwhich. Thats original as hell. The story was interesting as well and it made me want to see this made into a flash cartoon. I thought you did a great job on making everyone sound different, but at some points I could tell that you still had the cops accent in you when you were trying to do the sandwhich. What I do to prevent this is record all the lines separately and then mix them together after I write out the story. Make sure to always pause after each line, or else you will make an accent mistake more often. A noticable error in this entry was that you needed a pop filter to prevent PBT sounds. Look up on google how to make a home made one, works every time. Faved.

- 85

Thanks for entering the contest! *read below to see what the others said*

NAXSTER SAYS:

Acting 25 / 35
Fit 20 / 25
Originality 13 / 15
Range 15 / 15
Mixing 0 / 10

73/100

COMMENTS: Like the main character being a sandwich. No noticeable mixing. Pronounced your P's to close to the microphone.

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Acting - 24/35
Fit - 19/25
Originality - 10/15
Range 13/15
Mix 7/10

- 73

You trampled a few words and kept patting the mike with your breath. but this is extremely hilarious and wonderfully entertaining!

Scribbler SAYS:

Acting - 33
Fit - 23
Originality - 14
Range - 14
Mixing - 5

- 89

Original, that's the word I'm going to use to describe the overall feel of this one. The characters all sounded very different which made it even more interesting to listen to and even the title itself is clever. Something a couple of the other contestants didn't do that you did well was showing instead of simply telling. The introspection worked and your implementation of turtles is one of my favorites so far. The ending felt a little rushed but it worked because you ended with the word "turtle."

Score: 10

"SWEET"

by: IamCornholio

date: July 28, 2009

do a barrel roll or sumthin! lol that cracked my up! good voice acting by the way

Score: 10

"This entry sticks in my mind. . ."

by: rednikaiaG

date: July 18, 2009

like an olive on a toothpick, AMTRAX91------>
You're a funny guy and your voice skills are excellent!
You made me laugh out loud SEVERAL times, Man.
This idea was COMPLETELY original. I mean, I've NEVER heard a story told by a freakin' sammich! The way you could just switch it back and forth was immaculate. Was that done in different clips or was that all-in-one? *pats you on the back for an amazing entry* I wish you the best of luck in the contest, AMTRAX91!

.............Take care, be good and watch where you stash your Grey Poupon.period

Score: 10

"This Trucker's Tale Has The Potential To Win..."

by: CaptainAwesome121090

date: June 15, 2009

Despite he doesn't get eaten. Alright let's judge this thing.
Requirements: Met; Contest-eligible.

Acting: The acting was indeed superb although sometimes, I couldn't tell which cop was talking due to some monotone phases you had. Score: 9/10
Fit: The trucker did indeed sound like a stereotypical trucker (despite being a sandwhich). And the cops sounded like cops before they started to giggle and whinny like little school girls when they were allowed to see the turtles. Score: 9/10.
Range: Each voice was different, but like mentioned above some lines featured the cops to sound too similiar to distinguish. Score: 7/10
Originality: This story was indeed original and random (like it was pulled out of a penguin's ass kind of random), nevertheless priceless. Score: 10/10
Mixing: No sound except for your breathing was included in this storytime. just the way it should be. Score: 10/10.

Score: 10

"Great"

by: Bazflash

date: June 14, 2009

That was great, funny and original. well done man