Get the Pledge.

This track does a great job of being the thing you wanted it to be. Downbeat, melancholy, pensive, and dark. A few things, though:
1. The little scratch or whatever the Hell that was at :27-:29.....get rid of it. That made me want to turn this thing the Hell off right then and there.
2. You need to re-score some of your background work. Some of it is way too dissonant. I know this is probably done in a minor key, but if it stands out over even the scratches and beats, that makes it standout too much.
3. You're a little heavy on the drum and bass. Everything else could be kept the same, but the drums need to be levels down about 18% or so. You can have a great beat (which this is) without the drums standing out like a racist at the Million Man March.
4. I love how you dropped the beat around :27 seconds from the end. That was amazing. Sudden and predictable, but amazing. It was there that your background work and ambient effect tuning (that needed a little work) was the most apparent, but it was incredible. You could even fade those a hair right there, as there isn't a lot going on once the drum and bass go away.
This song works for what it is, but could use some polish.

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Superb

Smooth

Earned a fav. Good for background noise ( no that isn't a bad thing ).Thanks for not ruining it by adding shitty mainstream lyrics. For that you have my respect. DONT SELL OUT TO THE MAN!
4/5
9/10

Sorry, I didn't listen to the whole thing.

Had to give it a 5 early, so don't you dare think about getting mad at me. ;)

Yo Yo Yo

Ya know folkz now a dayz think that Hip Hop is all about some producer stealing a trance/electronica style melody and combining it with a beat and putting the same sterotypical rapper on it to say the same damn thing his predecessor said. Well check this out bro; what you made right here....this is hip hop. You get a 5 from me and a favorite.