Really nice.

Your style's great and unique. I personally like the 2nd melody more than the first. It seems to have more movement in it and i feel that that one could get further.

But both of them are great and they have lots of potential :D

For the second you're going great, I think you'd be able to develop that into a piano breakdown with a fadeout and bringing it back in like did at the beginning. I reckon that would sound really awesome :D

Also a harder kick, just layer a harder punchier club kick over the one you have now so it stands out more, then it should be great :D

Keep it up!

5'd

-Cheers Brando

Really Nice!

The first melo has a real Envy feel to it. If you want to make a song out of that one, just listen to his songs, see how it progresses, the elements he uses and base it off that. But remember always add your own originality so you dont look like a copycat.

the second one could be a good intro melody for the first melo.

If i were to make a song with those 2 melodies this is how i would make it progress.

Intro: Second melody with a cutoff fade in with heavy percs backing it up. Make it a DnB style. 30-45 seconds

Climax: 1st melody with the same heave percs and energy 30 - 45 seconds

Break: Make a third melody possible or make a variation of one of the melodies with strings backing it and maybe some piano chords as well. 20-30 seconds

Climax 2: 1st melody for about 25 seconds and then bring in the intro melody to back it up.

Outro: Cant think of anything atm but you can do that.

Hope this helps.

These melodies have real potential, hope you make something awesome out of it.

5/5 10/10 Keep it up.

GAH!!!!

i love it =D i just want it on my computer so i can listen to over and over again =D

i dont see anything wrong with it

This was kind of cool!

I liked how it sort of had that creepy feel to it.
It was nice. :]
good job. I like how the synths come in