Score: 10
"Excellent work!"
date: April 22, 2006
completely wrong genre though :)
There's very little about this that I would consider ambient - I think you'd get a lot more downloads if it were submitted under a different genre. Sounded like a mix of VG and Orchestral to me - but then, what do I know...
All around great work though RyeGuy!
This was a well constructed bit of music.
The only thing that I could suggest is that you vary the velocity of your notes to make it more dynamic and to give the feeling that it was actually played by a person.
More often than not, when people use piano, or most other instrumetns for that matter, they forget to adjust the velocity for the notes and every note sounds like it was hit with the same exact amount or pressure - which in effect it is... This is usually a dead giveaway that it was sequenced and I personally feel that it takes away from the piece just a bit.
Try it with your next submission and if I'm wrong then I apologize but I think it'll help give your music a new level of expression.
Keep it up man - this is fantastic work and it most definitely rates my 5!
Author's Response:
I think youll see the velocity changes in the piano in spring daze...
thanks for the advice
