I sense improvement.
Yep, I hear more melody this time. This has a good overall cheerful tone to it. The violin isn't annoying like it was on Aery. It was a good use of string instruments. So yeah good job.
Author Comments
My attempt at a strings piece. I used Pizzicato, Tremolo, Violin, Violin, and Cello. I had already finished half this piece. So i updated it and added the ending parts. I like this one. Tell me what you guys think and don't just zero bomb because you want to. Please leave reviews
lvl5drummer responds:
thank you sir. But if there was a compose-off your ass wouldve been toast. LOL. I like this one. Should I use this one instead of Aeryvin the project? I don't know!
<lvl5>
much better
The initial theme at the beginning needs work.
at :17 and 1:45, the lead violin just kinda drops out. maybe resolve it? add a C to the end of that.
ending-- eh. it just carries on.
needs to end around 2:19.
with that sounding so much like an ending, its a bit late to introduce a new theme.
Overall, a huge improvement from before-- doesn't sound like random notes thrown together. or give that impression.
:)
lvl5drummer responds:
thabks i realy appreciate it. I know what know what you mean about it being kinda drawn out. I was trying to make it longer and add an extra something. You know what I mean?
<Lvl5>
Credits & Info
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- Jun 3, 2009
- 8:50 PM EDT
- Genre
- Classical
- File Info
- Song
- 2.7 MB
- 2 min 57 sec
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