ok i guess

its realy good start 4 a song but it it to short.

to sctarchy

I couldnt understand it was quit blurry and fuzzy sounding

Nice work, Try mastering.

The main thing this song needs is a EQ on the master output. Just to balance things right and get rid of that slight fuzz. After that the bass should sound nice and solid. Good work, kinda short, I think you should breakdown halfway through this song and then put another theme in (switch up the guitar sound?) just to make it longer and more interesting. What you have is great =).

Overall...not bad

As a whole this song was pretty good. Personally i enjoyed the faster tempo more then when it played slow but the fact that it changed had me much more into the song wondering what would happen next. The guitar was nice though bit to much phasor in my opinion. Any way as i said overall a pretty good track and ill enjoy to hear what you put up next.

Mmm... Tasty

First things first... I love the change in tempo... quite effective. Great melody... great work. Throughout the piece it sounds like all the instruments tend to mesh together in a scratchy blurry sorta way. See what u can do to clarify it. Other than that... Congrats on a great piece.