Better..

This is better, so be happy for that :)

I found a few things to be a bit odd though. There is a bit too much bass on the bass drum, either cut the release of the kick, or lowere the base EQ for that. Or maybe it just sounds like that because the base has notes playing with the kick. The Open hihat. :P, is a little bit overpowering again.

You still have that arp too loud. Remember, that isn't the most important part of the track. Because it was too loud, I couldn't here the piano at all. The sidechaining pad sounded a lot better. Perhaps add some more reverb/mid EQ to enhance the sound. The piano is the most important part of the track, so it should be heard.

Keep the work up, I'm really starting to like this track more. ;)

Awwwwwww

You said happy birthday to your sister on the World Wide Web. Anyway, I loved the original, and this on only improves on it. Good job ;P