So I found out my first try wasn't that good... I've got to say I hadn't worked really hard on it too... This my second version of Something. I tried to follow the advices I got as much as possible and worked harder on this one. But please tell me if you think I could make it any better, I need your comments to improve myself, thx. :)

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