Change the title, and add something more...
This has nothing to do with the Crucification of Jesus Christ. I hear no words that relate to it. The song seems really disappointing, like a big loop... but it's not. I don't know if you picked a title out of hat for this piece, but it just doesn't work. I could imagine it took you SOME time to create this lovely thing-a-ma-jig, but it really needs some spicing up. Add some words, add a solo of some sort, and fix the damn title. Only then will you get a 10/10.