Havin fun with the Luv!

yeah track has interesting twists and turns that is what i like most about it. the fx are fun and enjoyable since they aren't common to hear in songs.

few things:
listen to your first review: lower the drums a tad in the intro. raise that pulse sound a little. when you go to export the song make sure to crop out sounds that arent audible so you dont have a long period of silence at the end.

one more thing around 2 minutes the bass should line up more with the percs to help listener follow the track more and enjoy it.

otherwise great work!

Piercing hi hat

I find the hi hat a little piercing for an ambient texture, maybe keep the mid lower would help? Then again i just like to keep a low mid on nearly everything. I like the fading hi hat idea though. I'm not sure whether the timing of the drums, should lay a more regular pulse the begining, just to establish themselves, before becoming more offbeat. The underlying bass is nice. I never quite know whether this is happy or not, i still feel like theres an underlying uneasyness about thios one. But that can still be good :) Anyway, more good work, hope to hear more ;)

Not bad

I could say though that the some of the drums could use a bit of reverb and maybe turned down a bit, but thats just in my oppinion. Also some times it seems a bit offbeat but that could be me.
Although, nice song, nice effects you used, nice sounds.