Score: 9
"Ah."
date: June 27, 2009
I have the utmost respect for the funkiness of this tune.
The only thing I feel could have been improved would be the speed at which you end it. I think that the ending lags too much, and I would have cut it off at 3:27, perhaps also turning the pitch of the very last note up a bit and increasing it's length with slight reverb. The reason I say this is that the song has quite a bit of energy, but the ending is so long that it drains it all out. Cutting it down would prevent that energy loss, and still provide an adequate sense of closure. These are just my opinions, I really don't know much about music, but try it out if you've got time.
:D
June 28, 2009
Author's Response:
Not a bad idea, and it could end up working out better than what I have. Unfortunately I can't edit the song on Newgrounds anymore cause it's been used in a submission, but I'll try it out for myself.
