Score: 7
"Has potential"
date: May 20, 2009
First off, the sub bass behind that kicker is insanely powerful
Now for the important bits:
1: You need to work on your mastering for this. In alot of areas I can hear static showing up from instruments being too loud, as well as areas where the kick "suppresses" the other instruments.
Use an equalizer or master volue to lower it a bit to clear up that problem.
2: A couple of your notes seemed off-key in the first half of the song, take a day off from composing the same project, then come back with "fresh ears" and listen through again every now and then to pick up on these spots.
Problems aside, this is a pretty simple sounding track that has alot of casual listening possibilities, I like the overall feel of it a bit. :)
August 20, 2009
Author's Response:
thx for your comment , house is not my first choice in music production , but your comment will help me make it better , thx
