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May 20, 2009 | 1:00 PM EDT
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Song
6.8 MB
3 min 45 sec
Score
4.11 / 5.00

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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
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Author Comments

Here is some new stuff for you. I've dicided to make some metal this time, I hope you enjoy it. It would be nice to hear what you think about it and how I could improve it.

greetings

Update:
final guitar equalizing

Update2:
drum update

Update3:
drum update2 & guitar line added

Reviews


FatKidWitAJetPakFatKidWitAJetPak

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Black Jets

The garage opens. A man carrying a white helmet to his side emerges from its musky chambers. He walks towards a silver jet with the letters 920BF carved on its side. He jumps in, starts the engine, and the planes back lights up in a pure flame. It begins going forward, slowly gains momentum, then lifts off into the air and zooms into the sky.

"Time to get those bastards..." he thinks to himself. He looks at a small picture of his daughter in the cockpit, and glares farther through the clouds. A few red dots appear on his radar, and he begins trailing them. He waits, like a falcoln, and then leaps upon his foes from within the thick clouds. He begins firing down upon them. An explosion occurs, then another. Two down, three to go.

They begin scattering, and deploying anti missle flares. The man focuses on the first one, and releases a bomb from his cargo. The bomb falls down into the air, almost as if it was a misfire. The enemy begins firing at the man. He heads straight for him. The are about to collide, and he knows the enemy will be honoured to take him down with him. He isnt going to let that happen.

With a fierce sweep, he curves the plain upwards and the enemy flies underneath him, and over the bomb that was released moments earlier. The man presses a button, and fire and gasoline reflects in his mirror. The last two enemies are heading towards him.

He begins firing his ammunition at them, twisting, turning, and rolling through the sky. One dodges the bullets, but the less trained pilot can not withstand the mans advanced maneuvers. His engine explodes, and the cockpit catches on fire. The pain zooms into the ocean below. One to go. Just one more.

They fly out into the open air, circling eachother for an instant. Two missiles are released, and then another two. Streams of smoke from the rockets paint the sky, along with two large red and yellow glares above the clouds. There is silence, and a little girl below begins to cry.

Although the battle was triumphant for us, the ones lost fighting it will never be forgotten.


People find this review helpful!

theafterliftertheafterlifter

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice, i like it

well done lad, brill music



scetchmastercullenscetchmastercullen

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Can I mix?

I want to add stronger bass to this and clear it up a bit through mixing... can I?



gormakergormaker

Rated 4 / 5 stars

nice...

Really nice job i liked it alot. Good work



Jamieneo66Jamieneo66

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not to shabby...

Pretty good, nice use of guitar, i didn't hear to much bass however, maybe yo udidn't use any i'm not sure, the drums suited well though i wouldn't of used the snare drum so much, as it sounds like its used in every 2nd and fourth beat, eitherway it still came out pretty well and it flows smoothly without any mistakes, so well done =]
I may end up using this in a flash i'm working on, action and stuff but yeah, so look forward to it if i die ;) i'll let you know if i do and credit you obviously XD