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just moved it to the ambient section and
made a couple corrections
best heard with high quality headphones
do not blast volume!!!
Not a bad piece
The intro is boring. You should try shortening it. I also think the song could make a great loop.
since the intro is sorta long i can see where you can lose intrest
and this can be a good loop, good idea! thanks!
You need to make the piano enter in your waving background sound. It's like if the piano was killing all other sounds, you need to put im part of the rest of the song. Put more reverb and soften it, I assure you it will sound better :)
Continue, hope to hear more :)
really boring begining, and i dont really think that a piano is the best instrument for the melody. make the sounds a bit softer....
with what I have and what I know,
this is all I can do
i couldnt think of anything else I could do in the beginning
and the piano seemed to be the best fitting
look at the other version of this if you want quieter piano and precussion
soo calm :)
very good but beginning is too boring
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