Score: 9
"Very Good!"
date: May 16, 2009
I love this one like your other pieces, however somethings did not work.
-The parts where it quieted down and then burst back up were quite annoying. You could just kept it where it was at 0:10, at the same volume, and then added the additional sections.
-It seemed too lucid to be a western type song.
Other than that, good job! I'll definitely be using this in one of my flashes!