Score: 10
"Astonishing..."
date: June 25, 2009
This is excellent--and yet it has the potential to become incredible. It seems like it should build to some sort of climax--at about 2:00 seems like a perfect spot to just -build-, at least for a minute or two (instead of restarting the beat at 2:40-ish.) After those couple of minutes, the melody should sweep the listener into a radiant joy, supported a strong low end (probably along the lines of DjUntold's review.) After that, let the song glide back down, and pick up with the rest of what you have from 2:40 onward. 3:08 to the end is simply beautiful--I would go so far as to say that it's perfect.
Sorry I can't provide more technical help to back up my thoughts--I'm more a musician than a composer. :P I'm sure if you ask anyone with experience in this area on Newgrounds they'll gladly help you out. :D