my exoskeleton

snayk

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snayk

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Date Submitted

05/12/2009 | 02:20PM EDT

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Pop Song | 7 MB | 5 min 7 sec

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Current Score

3.63 / 5.00

Score Rank: #61,634
Popularity Rank: #30,568

55 votes

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69 downloads

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Author Comments

If any of my songs could ever play on the radio, it would be this one. That's not something I'm deciding, it just says something about the song and the kind of stuff that plays on the radio.

The lyrics to this song just came into my head in the subway the other day, and when I got home I wrote half of this song (up until the bridge). I didn't have time to finish because I had a good deal of homework, but I just now put a couple of hours into it and wrote the bridge and finished it off.

Lyrics:

people tell me that i'm too young
people tell me things it's no fun
people scare me; i want to run
but i'm stuck in here with everyone

i'm hiding behind my exoskeleton
i'm crying; don't want to be like everyone
don't ask me why i don't want to hang out just for fun
i'm not anyone

i can't do this
i cannot see it through this
my mother told me not to be afraid
but i keep looking the other way
please help me to find my peace of mind
before i lose it again

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Average Score: 9.8 / 10

Score: 10
talker906

"love it"

date: August 24, 2009

so i'm basically in love with this song, and it is now on my ipod. on a totally unrelated topic- miss another DI week, and i'll stop downloading your songs. :) miss you, and i really can not stop listening to this.

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Score: 10
Craptaco

"Love it"

date: August 23, 2009

i like your song

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Score: 10
Hulalaoo

"i like this"

date: August 14, 2009

amazing, this song is really awesome !

August 15, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Score: 10
DwayneBarry

"This is really cool!"

date: May 14, 2009

You know, I wouldn't be surprised to hear this on a radio station, especially a college radio station. Also, there's always props to singing on your own track. Awesome job! I think you are my favorite artist on newgrounds.

May 14, 2009

Author's Response:

It's not that I would want to hear THIS song on the radio (I think I'd much rather hear some of my other music on the radio), just that I think it fits the radio formula. It's much more mainstream than my usual song and dance.

Glad you liked it, though. Thanks for the listen and review! I appreciate feedback and fans :D

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Score: 9
Maximus

"Nicely made."

date: May 13, 2009

Everything all went well. I'd love to see this pop up on the radio one day.

May 14, 2009

Author's Response:

:) SHANKS.

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