not bad...
.... but I think the original is best.
Author Comments
A year ago I wrote a song called Survivor on Music Maker, based on a War Story I made up in the process. A year later, I redid the whole thing on Garage Band. Scrapped the War Story. Got rid of the Robot Warfare, and made this a straight up, paranoid song about just trying to get through the next day when times are bad. The same amount of musical imagery exists regardless. I threw in a new hook that really catches my ear. I hope you like it.
needs improvement
i agree with tabu... its not entirely bad, but it needs a lot of improvement before i would give it a good score. You have potential to make great songs, but you need to work on it a bit.
metallikid6 responds:
Well thanks for not entirely bashing it. I'm still a bit of a novice at Garage Band, and perhaps it's not the best system to use, but it's what I got.
i gots an idea
It isn't that your musical talent is bad like that ass said above, it is your system and i have told you that for a while. You are a great composer, but need a system to match your talent. Here is my idea, go to Pirate Bay. Com and carefully pick a virus free download of fruityloops and work with that or something. then people like the guy above won't bomb your talent, which is bs. I got your back and know your skill. I think the reverb in your song is was gets to people, they don't like it. i don't mind, lol. i here the creativeness, not the system. Best of wishes and keep up the talent. peace bro.
metallikid6 responds:
Thanks for the continued support Bracksta. I'll definitely look into the Piratebay.com fruity loops thing... What's so damning is that I was just starting to get good at Garage Band, and thought i had a good thing going with it. Guess my best isn't enough with that system though. Regardless I'll finish the album on this system, and maybe move on to something better from here on in. I suppose every artist needs that awkward album as their sound changes before they're considered "great"
ummmmm....
well.... its...... take some music classes, and study some theory.... then submit a song... :/
metallikid6 responds:
Are you kidding me?? I'm a Music Teacher, and I aced Theory back in High School and College. The song is MEANT to sound dissonant.
Credits & Info
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- Votes
- 5
- Score
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0.87 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 11, 2009
- 2:01 PM EDT
- Genre
- Miscellaneous
- File Info
- Song
- 4.4 MB
- 3 min 13 sec
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