Score: 9
"Poor kid..."
date: June 9, 2009
lost his family, his bike, and his happiness. Through the many trials he had faced, he was never prepared to meet the love of his life in the hardest of times.
Her name was Paige, and she was his friend, his escape, and his one true love.
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Awesome stuff =) Definitely gives me story ideas for some form of screenplay. Love the lighthearted sound along with brish of triumph over complete loss.
Nicely done.... and it has been ages since I've reviewed something of yours. So, here ya be.
November 6, 2009
Author's Response:
Why thank you- and quite a story, I tell you. :D