poetic....
...but it's all a little too trebley. Reminds me of ArabStrap. I think if u adjust the levels and give it more bass and middle it would sound great. It sounds like the mic keeps wanting to feedback, and that doesnt help me to enjoy the lyrics, cos im waiting for it to peak, even tho it doesn't I spend the whole trk on edge waiting for it, instead of being relaxed by it, which is what i guess u are goin for.
Check the levels and this could be great.