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This is a song I wrote for a friend. She's always been there for me. I'm having some trouble trying to figure out how to end it though. Right now it's okay, but I'm trying to make it go somewhere before the end of the song and I'm not really sure how to go about that. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!

~Edit: Fixed the weird phrasing near the end and added some reverb effects

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Average Score: 9.4 / 10

Score: 10

"Yup, your now a new favorite of mine."

by: Treysen

date: October 29, 2009

This is just excellent... I really don't know what to say!

I definitely have to add you as a new favorite!

How do you make that whispering wind sound? I can never figure out how to do that! it makes this song sound perfect!

And it only gets better with that piano! lol, very nice!!

November 3, 2009

Author's Response:

thank you friend, i do my best. the whispering wind sound is something i downloaded off of soundsnap.com , it's a free site and easy to navigate, you should check it out for many cool sound samples.

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Score: 9

"Trippy."

by: Nephylis

date: September 6, 2009

I love it. :)

September 11, 2009

Author's Response:

ha awesome bro

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Score: 10

"Very Dolbyian (rockin', man)..."

by: Sociocognitivist

date: June 13, 2009

I'm really digging this. The samples are reminiscent of the song "Screen Kiss" by Thomas Dolby. It's a beautiful and elegant little piece you have composed here!

June 14, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks man, i can't say i'm familiar with Thomas Dolby, but i'm definitely going to check it out now that you mention him. i'm glad you liked it, and thanks again for the kind words

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Score: 10

"I like it"

by: Qpon2

date: May 18, 2009

What i recommend is have it trail of by having a set of instruments trailing of at one at a time and slow the beat. Also the melody quietly just sound out.

May 22, 2009

Author's Response:

good idea, although i still have to find out how to change the tempo in FL hehe. thanks for the input!

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Score: 8

"suggestion"

by: Ooooo336

date: May 1, 2009

how about making 2 songs out of this, at 0:46 its like a new introduction...

my suggestion, make 2 songs, one just a piano solo and another one with drumms and so on.

nice work ^^

May 1, 2009

Author's Response:

you know, I had the same thought, initially I had wanted to try to pick up the pace after the intro but I think it would work well as two separate songs and expand upon both. thanks for the feedback!