Sounds like an RPG battle theme

OH WOW!

I swear i heard this song and it didnt sound as amazing as it does now o.o

I love how you put the piano in and such.

Good start

You are heading in the right direction. You are doing a great job of adding instruments to give a nice layering effect. If I were a game proudcer, I would enjoy having this as part of a RPG score. By itself, though, it does tend a little toward repetition without variation. The more you do, though, the more you will hone your abilities, so I have no worries that you will continue to improve.

Keep up the good work!

Pretty Good Stuff

you have here. The violin sounds great. And it gives the whole 'war feel'. The drums I think are a little too quiet. It would give a more violent feel to it if the drums were louder. The only other criticism is that it's kind of repetitive. Other than that, it's great. Check out my stuff and let me know what you think! :)

Excellent

this is an excellent piece, the violin is great, what program do you use?