Well...

Considering the fact that this is a song from runescape, and not a song that you produced, I can't give this song a full score.

On the other hand, some parts of it were really good, and your choise of instruments fitted the mood well.

-Cazok-

Intresting...

This reminded me of a song on Runescape, which means that this obviously works as a video game song. Runescape's a crap game, don't get me wrong, but I like this music. You get maybe have more of the plucked strings. If they started earlier it would be better, but it's a very good song, well done.

Nice one

Alowa.
again a favorite of my.
I like the Voice *hooo hooo hoo*
is it you own voice?

wil your next Project a Hip-Hop loop/song be?

Xlio,
10/10
5/5

Great Musically...

I enjoy the composition quite a lot. There's no problems there (in my humble opinion)

Here's my only constructive criticism:

You need to add some reverb and a few other subtle effects to the main instruments / riffs / choir.
It sounds very dry and unnatural. Adding reverb can really make a difference. I would also recommend giving you notes a longer release time.
For example, on the choir, it starts gradually (has a longer attack time) but stops abruptly. If you increase the release time, it will fade out more naturally. The reverb will also help this.

I do love the plucked strings around 2:00 minutes in. Great work with that. Here's another example where some reverb and a touch of delay would go a long way.

Hopefully that wasn't too much. Like I said, I love the composition.

Larkeep