Score: 9
"My ideas on this masterpiece are:"
date: May 2, 2009
Well first, make a smooth intro with piano and a pad (+ a high pitched sub melo?), because that will blend in nicely with the piano in the overall song, and the (happy) melody.
In the main part, which is this part that got submitted, I wouldn't change that much it's good this way, perhaps shifting in leads, or some more effects. Nothing more. Because this melody is really good.
In the finished version it also ofcourse needs breakdowns/builds and a little more variaty try sidechaining some leads, and let that massive kick pound over it. Or something else you're good at. :P
For the ending I woud love to see it blend out with piano/pad/bass Because this bass is really wicked! I always loved fat sawy basses. ^^ Awesome kick too! It's really beefy and pounds great trough this track. Good job so far! ;)
Would deffinately see this finished, and I hope you will submit some more audio in the future since you're that mad about the TOP songs. Well for me it doesn't cares for is at the top, I know to find good artists and you're deffinately one of them!!
Take care,
-Ian.
9/10 5/5.
