nice comp...

i was wondering if i can use this song for my new indie mobile game...

Honestly...

This is purely awesome. At the first 30 seconds you really made me feel I was in another land, which isn't a feeling I usually feel listening to trance. This one is pure epicness. I think this song would be perfect for a background music, and the fact is, I used it on my site (PM me if you want to see it as I can't put the URL here)! I am really impatient to listen to the full version, I hope it is finished soon! Keep up the good work, you've got a serious talent there. But it isn't perfect yet: the starting is more epic than the end... Anyways, as I already said, keep it up! :P

wow

ya got me in the first 10 seconds. keep up the good work, i love the whole feel it... 2b honest i really cannot describe but yes i would luv to hear the full version

Wow.. taken away

Like others said, we underestimated you. This had a real epic trance feel to it.

But for a song to become great, you need critics, so if I may interject the following:
1) Watch the static/scratch sounds. I personally prefer losing them since they interfere with the rest of the channels, and distract from the epicness.
2) Don't worry about the length, don't rush things, but also don't make it a snail progression trance. When its done, it will be the right length.

yep that's about it- awesome.

hmmmm

Gotta say this actually sounds epic meaning this melody has potential cong