Score: 6
"not much"
date: April 23, 2009
I had to youtube this because I'm not familiar with the original track (nor very fond of this one here, sorry :'( )- and MidiRip or not, its sounds ALOT like the original track, from the melodic themes to breakesque percussion and instrument arrangement so points off for that.
I'm not much for remixing video game tracks right back into video game tracks unless theres a clear difference which sets it apart from the original, and contains interesting and freshly new elements. For example, you could have varied the percussion rhythms more, or even went for an entirely different style. You could have aimed for a different setup of instruments as well.
Some more tips:
-I feel the percussion could be a bit stronger, if you happen to be using FL, a quick fix is to throw it through a Soundgoodizer effect, adjust till it has a good boom without overpowering the mix. Also it wouldnt hurt to give it a more dynamic contrast, although I can definetly hear them in the transition segments.
-Instruments could be more spacious, experiment with different panning positions and varying amounts of reverb for a start
-The weird brass/flute hybrid that plays throughout feels a bit awkward, it needs a faster attack rate IMO. Google ASDR envelope, and then apply it to the volume control. On the other hand, the synthetic harp/string sound would be great with a slightly longer release, or just a tail with a nice reverb.
Keep it up, just strive to personalize your remixes more ok?
6/10
5/5
April 23, 2009
Author's Response:
Suddenly, I have the urge to remake this...but that'll come in due time. In the meantime, thanks loads for the tips. I can at least count on the fact that I'm getting better at this.
P.S. Don't take this statement the wrong way, but I'll be damned if I use MidiRip!
