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Date
04/20/2009
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Song
6.7 MB
3 min 40 sec
Score
3.78 / 5.00

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Electronic - Drum N Bass
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Author Comments

Wow! First upload in a million years, at least...
Went easy on the drums, and got some good synths going, finally.
I'd say it's pretty good, but i want to know what YOU think, so REVIEW!

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B34T1NB34T1N

Rated 4 / 5 stars

A few problems

Hey there, there isn't too many problems with this song, but there is a few that I'm going to point out to you.

Problem 1. The song is VERY repetitive, it needs to change once in a while, try using other techniques such as pitch slides, glitchy basses and glitchy drums, changing the drum pattern once in a while, if you want an example of changing your drums alot listen to my song Grind N Slash and to listen to a song with good variation and a decent bassline I'd recommend listening to something like Hollow Man by Cornandbeans.

Problem 2. Boring melody, boring synth, says it all in one go, you need a different scale of notes every now and then at least, even if it's only for a minute, try making a energetic type of synth for this type of music, the reason people are saying it's ambient is because the synth is just simply not energetic, you could even say it's calming, just put in that extra bit of effort and you'll get much better results, trust me on this one, Iused to do DnB all the time.

Problem 3. The drums are very plain and boring, if you're so stuck to these ones and don't want to change them put more drums behind them, I always have at least 3 or 4 drum lines going at once, variate them a little, make them work together!

Try all of these suggestions, you should come out with a much better song! =D

}{B34T1N}{ - Check out my music sometime please! =]

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FuNDaMeLoN responds:

Thanks for the advice - it has helped me improve on many of my more recent songs!


jetbusterjetbuster

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

hmmm :/

not exactly the big hardstyle stuff but works well as an abiance i think good job at it


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FuNDaMeLoN responds:

I am glad you like - thanks for reviewing.


OmegaManZXOmegaManZX

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

What I think? Pretty Catchy!

I think you did a great job. My only problem with it is that there isn't as much variation until about 2 minutes into it. But I think it works well for that kind of creepy, ambiance in a haunted forest.

9/10.


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FuNDaMeLoN responds:

Thanks for the review!
Well, I kind of tried to introduce some other elements into the beginning, but the song context just didn't go with it. But the end kind of makes up for it, I guess.
Thanks again (for the millionth time)