Great song

Jeesus fuck Death-9 could you romp on a kids talents any harder? He's 13 years old. All kids 13 years of age have voices like that, its not like he can do anything about it if he wants to sing his own lyrics (to you too, ph0ne).
I however do appreciate the actual critiquing you guys both did. Great critiquing, but that's all he needed, you know? The negative comments could have been left out. Seriously.

Great song, SoD. Keep it up, I wanna hear a remastered version of this song. Take Death-9's and ph0ne's critiques into consideration and apply it to your song. Like ph0ne said: This song has some serious potential.

What is this

Please, stop making music. Learn to use compressors, or at least how to EQ properly. The vocals are jarring and sudden, and very painful when they enter. Another complaint that I have with this is that it is terribly repetitive. I could count the total number of patterns in this song on my own two hands, and for an 8-minute song that's embarrassing.

Your effects and even your synths are over-used and contrived. It's completely unoriginal, and extraordinarily boring. The song's progression is simply tiring- it repeats entire sections with NO modification. You ought to at least spice it up a little bit, it's just terrible as it is.

I'm going to be honest, your song made me almost fall asleep, and not in a good way. The only reason i didn't go completely unconscious was because it was so poorly EQ/Mastered and so terribad.

So I awesome I had to log in to review it.

Yeah, this is really great. A little upbeat for my taste, but damn it's so chill and excellent. I couldn't help but love it. Reminds me of Burnout Paradise. Just cruising the countryside.

Professional

I'm gettin down to this beat. I love the vocals and voices that are used. It sounds so professional. You should make a CD. Your right it is worth it. Who is singing. Who is that talking "I Don't Want To D-D-D-D-D-Die" This could be used in a JSRF game. Maybe you could be the next Hideki Naganuma.

Very nice

With the vocals being the main theme, you did a good job. However, as others have mentioned, it takes too long for them to start.

The length is perfect, and the both the intro and ending were very nice and well done.

Overall the beat was good, too.

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