Augh! No!

It was going FANTASTIC! But then... Blech. If you'd made the first couple seconds into a whole song... BOOMtenstarsandafivestarratingforyou!

neat, but ...

it's pretty good!
but there are two things you should improve!
1) the name is horrible for a song like this. i know not every "frost" song has to be gloomy and dark, but this just don't fit!
2) mixing one song in another ... both tracks were nice, but it was awful how they just popped in right into the other tune!

7 stars for the nice melodies!

Hmmm... agree with everyone else

Whats with it sounding like its coming through water? Not sure why you changed the sound of the song. Melody is pretty sweet. Maybe with a different sound to it, it could have been better. Half decent job overall though. Agreed, you should make a version 2 of this song.

pretty good idea anyway

Although the review scores seem a bit low, the ratings have obviously been pretty high for this song. I think that's because people like the concept, it could just be fleshed out a bit better. The two-songs-in-one thing could have worked out fine with better transitions. I would suggest making a 2.0 version at some point in the future.

2 songs in one?

Up untill 9 seconds into the song, it was purely magnificent! Suddently something else got mixed in which wasn't even half as good.

If you take those first nine second, and make that out to be an entire song, the 10 review and 5 ratings will be rolling in!

On a more personal note; please make the first 9 seconds out to be an own song. I would absolutely love it :o