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My Torment with Vocals

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Uploaded
Apr 12, 2009 | 9:06 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.2 MB
3 min 30 sec
Score
4.05 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.05 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
690 Plays | 44 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
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Author Comments

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT! I'M RATHER PROUD OF MY VOCAL WORK!

CREDIT GOES TO PITCHBLAK FOR HIS ORIGINAL INSTRUMENTAL "MY TORMENT" IN ALL ITS BADASSERY!!!!

I wrote the lyrics and performed the vocal parts myself.

Lyrics:

(Verse 1):

there's a voice that's calling you
It breaks its sentence and extends a hand

To eternal Sufferong
you thought it took you to the promised land

view your face upon the wall
a broken mirror, a twisted reflection

this is now your destiny
to be condemned with the rest of your kind

(Chorus)
BURNED ALIVE
ent
you never knew that your pain was so strong

CHOKE AND DIE

a doomed future an eternity long

(Verse 2):
walking down a corridor
a ball and chain or a noose on the roof

"how can this be meant for me?!"
a failed existence now lies as your proof

I gotta get out of here
But it's too late, gotta do your time

My Punishment always exceeds the crime

( chorus )

(End, uh.... thinghy):
Live my torment
Face the end
My enslavement
Spatial Rend

you watch your punishment
a fitting end to you
gain no mercy
lies cut through

face creation
tell your sins
Lost foundation
Dead within

Reviews


netty-swobbnetty-swobb

Rated 5 / 5 stars

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Very nice dude. I'm lovin the lyrics. Nice clean vox!

The quality of the mic isn't very good.

This remids me of pantera, very Groove metaly

5/5 \m/



pitchblakpitchblak

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Cool man!

I thought it was pretty good, nice work with the lyrics ! There were a few parts where the vocals were a little loud but overall i thought you mixed them in well without drowning out the music. Some people tend to drown out the music with the vocals....Anyways, I think its pretty badass man.lol Alot of people get on here and critique the hell out of shit though like its supposed to perfect.For example...Jiffypop down there.lol I see he only tinkers around with FL loops, I would like to see him try and play the song. Anyways, I wasnt really happy with my guitar sound on this one myself but hope to get some more better quality sounding shit out there soon.Thanks for diggin my music and takin a stab at the vocals. later man


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TreKitasudesu responds:

Glad you liked it.

I'd love to do a collaborative effort with you, Since I think I can Lend a hand with my Guitar Skills too.

wanna give it a go? Lemme know! :D


jeffernosjeffernos

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

it's ok

i don't know how to rate it really but I can see it took lot's of work and i say that's great


TreKitasudesu responds:

thanks :3


jiffypop23jiffypop23

Rated 5 / 5 stars

sick!

didnt really like the intro, sounded like a shitty korn song lol
the tone of the guitar is kinda wimpy
didnt really sound like there was any bass guitar at all
the vocals were pretty awesome for the most part
there were a couple times where the mic was too close to ur mouth
most of the screaming was dead on and very cool, high shreeks and the low growls reminded me somewhat of black dahlia murder.
but some of the other screaming sounded like you were constricting on your throat too much.
and the regular screaming was kinda.......alright.
overall i enjoyed it, great job!
next time maybe hold the mic out more and lower volumes of instruments to accommodate the vocals (they were being drowned out at times)
you probably dont have the resources but recording an actual drumset wouldve made it a whole lot better.
and also maybe stick to 2 different kinds of screaming per song, feels like you varied it up too much.
again, great job!


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TreKitasudesu responds:

thanks actually, it was just the vocals. I forgot to credid the original Creator, Pitchblak for letting me use the instrumental version.

I'll Credit Pitchblak and let him know what you had to think.

thanks for the Criticism and I'll have more of my ORIGINAL stuff up soon.