I'm the outcast.
Personally I like the long intro more then the second half personally. The intro its self isnt great but like you already stated, its sneaky and well in a zelda game a good sneak and search is always fun, however your random, "dance" sounding instruments I really didn't like at all. Sneaky followed by dance just reminded me of the adventure mode for smash brothers melee, and the song just didn't make me think zelda at all. Now as a song its decent however my rule is when it comes too video game music "REMIXES" it must be able too replace or reuse the same song as if it was in the original game or could be used in a newer game, and I hate too say it, but I couldn't see that with this song. Sorry-Again though this is only one person's opinion here. No hard feelings cause I am aware of that you sent time and effort on this.