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Apr 10, 2009 | 7:14 PM EDT
File Info
5 MB
5 min 29 sec
4.10 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 4.10 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
365 Plays | 37 Downloads
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Metal, Rock - General Rock

Author Comments

We are Fight for Norman and a band of lads around 17yrs old. This is our first song recorded and we would like some honest feedback. Anyone who plays in a band and who have good suggestions on any aspect then your views will be gratefully accepted, thank you.




Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Heavy, guys

The vocals are a bit too breathy (in the beginning) for me, but I love the overall heaviness that's just radiating off this song. Maybe a bit more of a bassline. I'm the lead lyricist and vocalist of a surf-rock band that I'm putting together.
I have two big-ish complaints. One: your singing style seems derivative. Two: your lyrics leave a lot to be desired. I mean, I know it's just a rock song, but they aren't really that good. You could play at a higher level with better lyrics.
Also, if you used an ostrich guitar (if you don't have a sitar or balalaika) for the acoustic part at around 4:00.
Hope I was helpful!
~the Crab