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Uploaded
Apr 10, 2009 | 6:55 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.8 MB
4 min 11 sec
Score
3.21 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.21 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
903 Plays | 62 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

Still not complete, I've got a lot to do still.. It seems the more I do the more I have left to do..
Please offer constructive criticism and I'll do my best to finish this soon.

Thanks!

Reviews


ok63ok63

Rated 5 / 5 stars

cool dude :D

a) I really like your other song and hope you make more songs :D
b) the beggining is repetive and is almost the same as your other song.:D


Zenan responds:

J2A = Journey to Andromeda :P
This was submitted before and I wanted reviews to see what I should work on, it is the same song :) Thanks


chrisG755chrisG755

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Awesome

This for a start had an excellent build up, and beginning trueTrance style your beat was nice high and clean it work well with the bubble quieter syth.
Then the main syth was good nice melody you kept a good beat throughout the piece.
Try to use more predominant beats, and change the tone and syth more.

Apart from that Great!


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Zenan responds:

Yeah, I'm going to sort out the bass!
Thanks! :)


DavidOrrDavidOrr

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice work!

There are a lot of good things here. The track progressed well, and it had a steady beat to it. Good job with that!

Some of the levels of the instruments weren't especially well balanced- the bass was very hard to hear. I think you may be mixing on some unbalanced speakers, so try getting another set of speakers or a set of headphones to provide an alternate listening angle. One last point I had was there doesn't seem to be quite enough variation- I think you could benefit from adding in some more variety throughout the keep the listener's attention.

All in all a very good start, keep up the good work!

5/5

If you have a minute I'd love your thoughts on my latest track ST Conflict!


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Zenan responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm trying to take in all of the advice given and it's sounding a lot better already! I will listen to your track and review, cheers!


MegaPixel-MusicMegaPixel-Music

Rated 3 / 5 stars

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I liked the intro especially the very start of the song
And after the intro the build to the actual song is cool
Nice arpeggios
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Everything in the piece seems like it needs more.
The intro part, it sounds like it should be more mysterious and unknown. It doesn't progress.
It needs a melody of some sort to stand out.
Arpeggios over and over get boring,


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Zenan responds:

Totally agree, I've recreated the whole intro now, I'll be updating it soon. Thanks!


EternalXIIIEternalXIII

Rated 4 / 5 stars

not bad at all

Intro needs to get my attention though. It was way too long. Generally people need to be attracted to your song in the first 15 seconds or so. The quicker you can catch someones ear, the better. Your song doesn't even really seem to pick up until some time after 1 minute. I would also recommend some more counter melodies and layers in general. Another thing. Your bass doesn't seem to come through enough. Try eqing the bass up. Hope this helps.


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Zenan responds:

Cheers for the review dude.
I was kinda going for the long intro, I like it like that. I agree I do need to up the bass, that was coming through before, I must've fucked something up.
I'll try and sort it out, thanks! :)