-+[Freefall]+-


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04/09/2009 | 11:35PM EDT

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Classical Song | 1.4 MB | 1 min 29 sec

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4.04 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Mandi's Dream- The End

Trapped... I stood upon that highest balcony, these beautiful but savage beings standing at the only opening, and a plunge several hundreds of feet towards the open golden-brown sea at my back. The wind seemed to whisper words of advice into my ears, but I could not quite hear them. The people before me advanced a step, spears poised at my throat. There was only one more option...
Slowly, I stood upon the rail of the pillared balcony, my arms stretched out to either side. Fear clutched at my stomach, making me wince slightly. What I was about to do was crazy, and could possibly cost me my life. Possibly. Closing my eyes, I let go and fell backwards, silently taking the plunge. I waited for that terrifying sinking feeling to take wing, but felt nothing. Curious, I opened my eyes to the world around me. There was no fear at all... Not a sound, not a breath... Only that of the wind howling as I gently fell. The water hit me faster than I had predicted, swallowing me in a warmth greater than the humid sticky air. Enveloped in this warmth, I felt a strange sense of comfort in it. My thoughts slowly melted away, soon forgetting all about the beautiful people above me. I was only then reminded when some of their spears hit the water all around me, sinking down continuously into the bottomless depths. I reached out my arms to swim, kicking feebly, the soothing warmth beginning to relax my muscles completely. My already blurry vision began to blur faster, faster, my mind shutting down along with my muscles.
I closed my eyes, letting the warm comforting darkness take me over...
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Average Score: 9.6 / 10

Score: 8
mastermuffin

"maybe an rpg?"

date: April 19, 2009

this song sounds like an Rpg thing. it reminds me of one of those cave levels. i dont know.plus it loops. but its a good song. though most of it seems kinda repetive being the RPG player myself. so it was kinda a bore. you still rock mandi.

ALOT

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Score: 10
Fargh82

"Another fantastic "peace""

date: April 13, 2009

"another soul put to rest, in the deep caverns below. But there is little man can do, to alter eternities echo. The cloth of fate is being unraveled, by all the weary paths we travel. But through it all i am at peace,because, in the great tapestry i am one crease."- a short poem by Fargh82, which this song inspired, thanks to you i have a project done with an A+ in my poetry class :D

April 14, 2009

Author's Response:

Lovely poetry, Fargh! I'm glad you liked it that much. More to come on this dream. It was a very very long one, and so I'll have a lot to write about it!

With love,
Mandi <3

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Score: 9
Bahamut0ne

"Another great piece!"

date: April 13, 2009

I would recommend some more dynamic changes, but I think the song is still very good. Great work, hope to see more!

April 14, 2009

Author's Response:

Yeah, I realized that my piano has little crescendoing, and that is no good. Thanks for pointing that out, and thanks for listening!

With love,
Mandi <3

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Score: 10
LordBaron

"AWESOME"

date: April 12, 2009

I have listened to your music for awhile now and I must say absolutely delightful You and Lady Arsenic are a wonderfully amazing combo

April 14, 2009

Author's Response:

Thank you, but Maestro Rage had absolutely nothing to do with this piece. It's fully mine. Thanks for listening!

With love,
Mandi <3

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Score: 10
Inseperable

"<3!!!"

date: April 12, 2009

Loving this so much! That piano near the last half... :'D! I want to hear the rest of this dream Mandi! It sounds kind of sad at the end, you didn't die or anything did you D:? It's just cuz you know... after freefall there's always the ground that will stop your fall... But I could definitely see myself jumping off a plane and just watching the clouds rush by me, a pure and gentle sensation.

Looking forward to much much more!

April 14, 2009

Author's Response:

I didn't die, really... I'm not sure what really happened to me in the end. It was almost as if the water had erased my memory and sent me back to this world. It was so vivid; like it was a real live place, and I just wasn't supposed to be there. It was amazing. Thanks for listening! More to come.

With love,
Mandi <3

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