The Journey Within

Gravey

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Date Submitted

04/04/2009 | 02:08PM EDT

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Classical Song | 3.8 MB | 4 min 8 sec

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4.16 / 5.00

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Author Comments

I wrote this for a contest I saw in the BBS the other day. The contest rules were we had to "create" a new genre of music. Or take multiple genres and smash them together to come up with something totally new and original sounding. Sadly, I can't find the thread, so I'm not able to submit it. If anyone knows what contest I'm talking about and can link me, I would GREATLY appreciate it! Thanks!

[Edit] I have been given the link to the thread. My song has been submitted. Thanks for the help guys! :-D

Now, on to the song.

I wanted the beginning to have an ambient style, with a focus on the piano and bass guitar. There is also some light choir vocals going on, but nothing that is extraordinary. I wanted to keep things simple in the beginning especially, with a very somewhat dark and damp atmosphere.

So to create the atmosphere, I lowered the high end on the overall EQ on the piano a bit. I then added a second EQ plug-in channel on top of that one, and had it automated. So the EQ on the piano is constantly changing in the beginning of the song.

I did the same with the reverb because I wanted to create a 3D effect in the beginning of the song. If you really REALLY listen, you can hear the piano come forward and backwards. As if it were moving closer and farther away in the middle of a cave. That was the sort of idea I had going. I've been experimenting with 3D music ever since I graduated from OU. And I think it really creates an amazing atmosphere in the song, and a great effect on the music as a whole. Now my only goal is to get the typical listener to understand and appreciate 3D music. :-)

After finishing the piano part for the beginning, I decided I wanted to finish with a flurry in the piano. And also make some epic orchestration to go along with it. BUT! I did not want to write in a classical sense. I wanted the instruments to be orchestral, but I decided I would write the last half in a drum and bass style.

Now when I say I wrote the ending in a drum and bass style, I mean that instead of constant changes in the harmonies and melodies, I just added layer after layer after layer until I reached a massively full and epic sound at the end. I could not help but think it got a little stale, so I decided to add a little section right before the very end. It is a trumpet/trombone fanfare section, and I am beyond pleased with how it turned out. Especially with the choir moment at 3:03. That spot gives me chills every time I hear it, and I hope it has the same effect on you.

I have to say, that my good friend TestSubjectA was more than a slight influence for that small spot in this piece. What can I say? I LOVE his stuff, especially Vaudeville Circus. And the violin in that piece of his was the inspiration for that moment. So yea, had to throw a plug in right here for my friend! :-D

Also, I wanted to create a slight industrial touch to this song as well. So when the snare comes in at 1:44 at the left side of the song, you will hear on the right some clicks that are playing an even more in depth rhythm. Also, there is some distortions on the choir at 3:03 obviously, and some epic hits with distortion in the very last section. They really helped to make the ending a little extra epic.

I'm so happy with how this turned out. For most of you who have come to expect a story with my pieces, sorry but you do not get one this time. I want you to come up with your own visualizations. Then I want you to tell me what you see and hear in your mind when listening to this. And honestly, I'm greatly interested in what visualizations come to mind when listening to this. :-)

I really hope you enjoy The Journey Within my friend!

-Gravey-

[Edit] I want to thank everyone that has left amazing reviews with stories. So many awesome pictures are coming from the minds of you all. I'm really pleased as to how this stimulates such vivid and varying visualizations in so many people. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

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Average Score: 9.7 / 10

Score: 10
TheSoulScream

"Beatiful!"

date: July 15, 2009

Amazing! So relaxing then so angry! Nice work!

10/10
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July 15, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad to see you are enjoying my music so much. :-)

-Gravey-

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Score: 10
Xenotra2

"Wonderful progression."

date: July 15, 2009

You have a great talent for layering. The most specific point I can think of is around 2:10, when you continue to counter-melodies and permutations, until the cut, and quick build back into the main progression at 3:05 (a technique I am known to use as well). All very impressive.

July 15, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks! I really feel this is one of my better written compositions. It is definitely one of the most intense and it just seems to grow and grow as the song continues on. And yes, layering is something I do a lot in my songs. I do kinda have a knack for it like you said. :-)

Glad you liked the piece.

Thanks for the review!

-Gravey-

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Score: 10
KhaoticAngel

"Very Awe Striking Stuff"

date: June 15, 2009

It Gave me utter Chills

-The choice of music and instruments were fantastics and how you placed them made the music move greatly!
-Almost made me feel like I was in a Epic War within myself when i closed my eyes and just let my mind go wild with the music.
-Sounds of Triumph were heard in there I believe and that kinda goes along with the title Journey Within because when you look inside yourself you find more then just hardships you find things that you charish.
-Very Up-beat and strong feel to it that even had a subconsciously calms the listener down and focuses them on the music.

10/10
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I may have been too Deep, but thats what I felt and Good Luck on everything that you may work on in the future

"Hard work gets you somewhere in Life, but without the Imagination and Love for that work can you truely be appreciated and remembered for your place in this world."
~Dillon Queen (KhaoticAngel)

June 15, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review! I really appreciate it. I'm glad that it spurred these emotions within you. Always makes me happy to know that my music has an effect on people.

Thanks again for the awesome review!

-Gravey-

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Score: 9
Hormigas

"Nice dude!"

date: June 2, 2009

Could you tell me what you used for the piano and deepish voice stuff?

THX!

-Hormigas

June 4, 2009

Author's Response:

Ummmm...To be honest, no. I've been so busy lately, and my pc has become an utter mess. I honestly don't even know what happened to all my FL Studio session files. My pc has crashed several times in the last month or so, and I'm in the process of getting a MAC and Pro-Tools.

So to be honest I have no idea where the fuck anything is on my pc anymore. And I really don't have the time to look for it all with my schedule at the moment. But if I do happen to come across all my FL Studio session files, (Wherever the Hell they may be), I will definitely check this song out for you.

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed the piece so much.

-Gravey-

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Score: 8
NeverHundred

"one thing bothered me."

date: April 11, 2009

There was some places in the song were the flute sounded a little off to me. I suppose the first time I really noticed was at 1:50. But now that that's over with let's move on the the praise.

The into was fairly interesting, building up with just the right momentum. I liked the marching beat and most of the orchestral bits. Overall it was quite good.

April 13, 2009

Author's Response:

Hmmm....Not sure why the flute sounds off to you. You are the first person who really thought that. There is definitely a lot of dissonance, which was intended to create tension and release. Maybe that is what you are hearing.

Thanks for the review.

-Gravey-

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