Its fine

-Nice job, for the most part. This loop is quite a knife-to-the-ear; it simply is annoying! Its the same tone (maybe Two) that just keep repeating at different interval with a slight beat every now and then. Yet, it does have a "robotic" feel to it. Much like other users, I can't listen to this for long, or i will destroy my speakers. But yea, you made a loop that sticks in your head (Argh!!), although the overall tone and quality would seem to... not fit in any good flash game- but that's alright! I can't really seem to say "Great work, i hope to see more" because i honestly didn't like it much; its too simple! I understand the way you were approaching the loop, but there are ways you can make it more sophisticated, although you don't seem to be really high on working on this loop.
== A nice attempt ==
-HardBall

it's cool but..

i wouldn't be able to listen to this loop more than two times

I dunno`

what was that?
its to quiet
-to short
-a little annoying

nice

very cool, though the loop doesnt fit in. a few notes are cut off i can hear

honest

I honestly didn't like it, I'm no expert but it just doesn't sound very good to me, just very annoying and repetitive. I may be wrong so I gave 5*.