My Shine


Date Submitted

04/02/2009 | 04:50PM EDT

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Hip Hop - Modern Song | 3.1 MB | 2 min 42 sec

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4.31 / 5.00

Score Rank: #16,684
Popularity Rank: #54,086

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Author Comments

My Shine beat by VTZ

VERSE 1

I've made little money and you wish it were yours
Try for opportunity constantly Kicked to the curb
That's absurd like a meteor that's getting nearer
Everything is clearer when I look inside the mirror
You got your beady eyes locked on the eyes of fire
While we're suffering from millions of lies of a liar
You are what you eat so go munch some crackers
Go hunch the macker we still Bunch of actors
The future looks dark why we wreck all of we
The Absolute best out of me, IT technology
A politician doin nothing but sittin stoned there
Moanin there Groanin there won't stare cuz I don't care
They run so they can be on that fame of joy
but they slackin so much go and name your boy
Get yourself locked up tied inside the basement
did my time , It's my time, am i the replacement?

VERSE 2

liqurish full of gibberish that of a nun steal
who is asking for favors it's not a done deal
this place is roofless, phone rings who's this
they talk toothless losin it so damn clueless
I put the time to choose this, what do I got to lose
Are you the one that's asking that I spot you juice?
Cuz people are needy we eat so we're speedy
Leaders are cheesy while CEOs are greedy
The over-paid makin the Economy sleezy
Can't do nothing, Taking it easy like young rapper jeezy
But I'ma take this, do whatever it takes to make it
Eat food, wake quick, everything is butt naked
So that economic stimulus is the plan of action
For the college graduate computer Man of passion
Competition is strong go ahead enter enter g
there's so much energy natural when you're me

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Average Score: 9.2 / 10

Score: 6
MickeyMao

"Well..."

date: May 5, 2009

You got decent lyrics but I'm not quite feeling your delivery/flow, it doesnt sound like your feeling your rap, I mean no disrespect with this, its just the impression I got after the first listen. Keep at it man, peace

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Score: 10
HeLLsGaUrDiAn

"Feelin the message"

date: April 25, 2009

Loved the message you're sending with this track and it's true. This recession is bad enough but the government is slackin hard. Anyways, solid track and you're improving your flow but your delivery still needs some work. Your lyrics were on point and I like how you stayed on topic. Stay up man.

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Score: 10
ColdReaver

"Ill-beat yoink"

date: April 9, 2009

I'm lovin that My shine song, and as usual very nice lyrics, thought-provoking.
You rapped great for the most part, just need to practice letting it flow alittle more.
overall awesome job man!
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Score: 10
ShortMonkey

"sweet"

date: April 6, 2009

Nice song.

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Score: 10
J-Kellz

"bong"

date: April 2, 2009

well done vinny b

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