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<PS> Yism'chu

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***DISCLAIMER*** YOU WILL NEED TO TURN UP THE VOLUME. Sorry for the trouble!

This is my entry for the Represent a Country 2 contest. Yay!

The song is "Yism'chu" which is a Jewish folk song, but I made a lot of changes! Instrumentation includes a flute solo and string orchestra.

Speaking of the flute solo...

I know, it's crazy! But I have played with Jim Walker, and seeing what he can do, he served as a major inspiration. So no, this is not exactly playable. I have checked. :)

Do me a favor. Please listen, vote and review fairly (this song is not worth crap, and I know that), but most importantly, please enjoy!

Shalom!

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Hey I really really like all this you put into it but look

you need to really really clear it up, some of the themes, and main sounds are not really fitting? Idk just sounded like it needed to be more...clear, and with the backround sound, but over all I must say, it was a wonderful piece of art.

to be honest, I thought I was listening to a real sound hearted in my face song!
that flute...that thing was the only problem I guess, didnt fit in at some parts, not feeling loud enough
that or im just not used to this style
to hell with it I cant say anything, my stuff isnt half as good!
:P +1 star for you kicking my ass

PenguinSam responds:

Well, I haven't gotten an extra star for that before. :P

Thanks for reviewing this! And I must say that I agree with what you said as well. I may add more volume to the flute later, but it may have a very slight affect on the clarity, but it shouldn't be anything noticable.

and I must say, those RAC contests are fun, and I am think ahead for the next one, so watch out!

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Now that is a tasty bagel

I can't say i've heard a lot of jewish music, but without the description i'd guess it would come from that culture!

when you said unplayable, well pretty much, considering strings can't pitchbend, lol ;) (I wouldnt have included that)

Otherwise, great, warm string samples! Nice authentic sounding reverb too, was that your doing or a natural part of the samples? (Which library are you using by the way?)

Melodies, harmonies are great. I love the chord progressions, great usage of the harmonic minor scale, its my fav :]

Flute flowed perfectly, I have no critiques in this department. Great blend of articulations, beautiful legato, love the staccato phrasing in the quiet section. The trill back into the main phrase was very well executed too. Melody was very well sequenced and developed, although I wasnt fond of the segment that occured at 2:25-2:229ish and later in the song. The third phrase pretty much felt like a copy and paste of the first section :P, so maybe try to flesh out the melody more by focusing on certain tones and cut some of the fast ornamental licks.

And when I hear something worldy, personally, I would look to hear a more exotic instrument. I know Jewish is a European culture and they use similar if not pretty much the same (except the jaw harp :P) instruments that you would hear in the western world. Well, I probably shouldnt have wrote this paragraph 'cuz I dont have any specific suggestions.

Strings were great, they served as a great harmony backdrop, although they were rhytmically awkward. The contrast between the bass and accented, higher string sections on the offbeat gave off a good dancey vibe. Maybe to increase the rhytmic basis include perhaps some plucked violins to go along with the first and third section.

At 0:49-0:55, I like the chord ideas, but the rhythmic placement seems rushed and overly detached.

1:00-1:30ish, I think the strings would sound nicer here if you had a semi-slow vibrato sample and utilized it here.

Other than that, the soft, plucked string section was great. Good dynamic contrast! Ending was great, I lke the pretty sudden ending, goes with the light-weighted, and brisk theme of the piece.

As far as the mixing, although it may go against typical orchestral settings, I'd bring the flute more up to the front so it has more prominence in the more boisterous string sections by increasing the volume, and slightly lowering the amount of reverb, if you can. There was also one high pitched note that was a bit painful and caused the sound to peak a bit, work some sublte compression and/or filtering on that thing and your mix will be golden.

Keep it up and good luck with the contest! Definetly an interesting listen! and sorry of these suggestions were a lot, i tend to go overboard in reviews -_-

PenguinSam responds:

Wow! If had a "Longest review I have ever recived award" it would go to you!

Now, the program that I am using is called Finale 2006, so I can't do much but chose between two libraries that comes with it, so I can't really help there.

And for the chord structure, I didn't chose it. That's just how it goes in the folk song.

And more flute would be desirable, but too much would cause pain to many ears!

Don't know what else to say, thank you!

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Taste The Rich And Fatty Goodness...

This is perfect, considering this songs purpose.

The entire mood and setting of the piece really seems to encompass the style of a Jewish folk song. It has a very danceable quality to it, and that is very important.

The instrument choices are very tasteful. Really, you created a great ensemble for this style of song.

The instrumentation is pretty simple overall. But the flute part is pretty intense and technical. And that gives it that intellectual integrity I want in my music.

And the mix is just about perfect. I really can't think of any way to improve on it.

5/5 and 10/10 overall. Wonderful job here bud!

-Gravey-

PenguinSam responds:

Thanks! I really apprecicate that!

Being Jewish myself, I know what good Jewish Folk Music sounds like, and Yism'chu is one of the best! and I agree, the danceable quality is very important.

And speaking about the ensemble, I almost chose a larinet instead of a flute, but it couldn't play high enough to be heard over the ensemble!

I'm glad that you enjoyed! Thank you!

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Amazing! As alwasy ;)

I dont have much to say to you, I simply enjoyed this so much, I couldnt found any flaws whatsoever, probably because I simply loose myself on this amazing piece!

I applaud your talent and I just hope you get more recognition for what you make, and if you dont get it here, Im sure you will find it on somewhere else ; )

Oh! Btw, remember I told ya you had inspired me to make my own classical music? Well I just made one ;D Check it out please (http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/226370), and tell me what you think ^^ Thanks!

Peace bro!

PenguinSam responds:

Sweet! I must hear it! And thanks!

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OST

Sounds professional, just like if this was a Soundtrack of a film

well done

PenguinSam responds:

Thanks! A lot of my music has been described as a Sountrack style or mention movies. Hearing those comments makes me smile!

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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
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Score
4.75 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 31, 2009
11:11 PM EDT
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
2.8 MB
3 min 1 sec

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