Great
Nice remix, i liked the original, there almost the same thing, well, almost...
Nice song dude ;D
Author Comments
The title's a literal translation. Frankly, I was bored, and I noticed that there were ABSOLUTELY NONE of the Numas here that are metal. So, I made one myself. Frankly, I ain't saying that I'm the best talent here in Newgrounds, but it sounds pretty similar, except for the pitch. Personally, I think it sounds better that way.
Treviabot92-Virstein responds:
Glad you liked it. I was kinda surprised that no one did a metal version, not to mention bored out of my mind, so I did this. Thanks for the comments.
eh.
I think those full-metal guys are just the same person and a troll. Never mind him, but this needs improvement on the instruments. The guitar is pretty weak sounding, and has shades of the bad Slayer VST for FL. The snare drum is also weak and the kick drum needs more oomph. This needs more bass too. You just need some more mixing and mastering experience that only time can bring forward. So keep it up, because "stop making music", believe it or not, doesn't help :P lol. I like the drum fills though.
Treviabot92-Virstein responds:
Don't worry about them, they're just stupid. Thanks for your comments.
A haha !!
MAN!! XD just heard it e hehe nice idea^^ and it's well done.....DUDE...yeah F#rizzle ma'shlissel >XD a haha
No: SERIOUS now...I really enjoyed it!! MAN THSI ROCKS SO HARD MY BALLZ >)
Even better than this version from this nerd that francais-nurse, from this dutches or sweden or somethin' together >)
WELL, dude, that made my night
Fav'D, Vote ,,5'' / 1000/1000
Another wish? Any questions^^ ?
P.S. Ahh by the way...THATS asum..had I ever mentioned??!?! >D
Treviabot92-Virstein responds:
Dude, if this is awesome, then you are, like, the metal disciple! It's not too hard to make music, all you gotta do is find the right instruments and tunes. Unless you're remixing an original, in which case, you already got the tune, which is the case here. To tell you the truth, I wanna see a numa mix from EVERYONE here! I'm already pumped for albatross's song!
ok well lets see
well first of all you have a good sound but you should add more instruments to the piece and also what you are missing is transition throughout the song it's just repetitive all the way thru but the loop is one thing that you did right but you should try more songs that are out there remember when you make songs you have to grab the listeners attention with tones and sounds that they havent heard in a song before try more video game songs i'll give you ex. but just try new tones samples and techniques to go all out and you'll do fine. oh and also your gonna have to update me cuz i have 418 other artists on my list besides you your #419 so i may not see songs that often
Treviabot92-Virstein responds:
Thanks for the advice. I'll try better at keeping you posted. Ideas come slowly to me, unfortunately. For whoever is wondering, I used DIST Metal twice. One should barely be heard. The main was double-coil, and the second setting was Combo, not British. The background one was single-coil, and the second setting was British, the original settings. I also used BASS Slap Power for the other one easily heard, but behind the main. I modified it so that it sounded more like an actual guitar.
mm...too basic =/
I like your idea of metalizing it but i thought the song was a bit too simple. You had like the same drums and the same sound for guitar until maybe the end. Try just adding more to the song and make it really rich and lively. Add more guitars like maybe put a bass one, and a lead guitar one and such. 8/10. 4/5. Dont listen to the people below who gave you a 0. just keep making songs, your gonna get better and better :)
Treviabot92-Virstein responds:
Those guys are nothing to worry about, they just lack any common sense you could expect from someone their age. I actually did have a bass, that's the one in the background that's deeper. I also have one that you should only BARELY be able to hear that's the same as the main one. Thanks for the advice, though, it was a pain in the ass trying to get the "alo salut something haiduk" portion proper. I had to put drums in that pattern to get the rhythm right (course, I took them out).
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4.55 / 5.00
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- Mar 27, 2009
- 10:36 PM EDT
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- Heavy Metal
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- 2 min 53 sec
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