Deceitful Conscience(P. Zajed)


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03/25/2009 | 07:24PM EDT

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Hip Hop - Modern Song | 6.7 MB | 4 min 52 sec

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Author Comments

Title: Deceitful Conscience
Artists: Burly & DeX
Produced By: Zajed - Sitting and Waiting (Link: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/123547)
Mixed and Mastered: InGenius (Thanks a lot again my n***a for the favor, you know I always appreciate it.)

Alright guys, this is the lyrical massacre of 2009 :) This track was made for lyrical purposes and before everyone starts getting crazy on how the lyrics don't make sense, make sure you pay attention because there is a message behind this track.

~Lyrics~
*Sorry about the hook, not enough room to get it in here, but you should be able to figure that out*

Burly's Verse 1

twine for my subjects puppets rise gradually
thought to substance lost clutch on reality
but a mere casualty cause reverse gravity
can be mentally damaging battling statically
attack telepathically anatomy is vanishing
brandishing the fallacy somethings coming after me
stabbing me happily laughing with savagery
assault and battery cage you thought it was ink on a page
Let me sink into your veins Like razor blades in a suicidal rage
defiled saints in the wake of our destruction
Walls crumble from bomb shell concussions
mind stumbles, blood pumping obstructions
introduction to mind consumption redefined abduction
through these lines of instruction abrupt induction of corruption
the covenant loves crushing em into nothing

DeX's Verse 1

Infusion of my body and soul cushions my essence
Illusions of contusions containin' an evil presence
this lesson forever embedded within my vengeance
intrudin' tenants steadily' amplifyin' aggressions
the heavens open rapidly the road to insanity
vagrancies of vanity obstructs my mentality
the faces of reality reveal clarity
deities become liabilities to my entity
explicitly damagin' to my mobility
only then I experience an epiphany
tied to boundaries within' my psyche
a bounty put on me by afflictions
my vision slurred by these depictions
stricken and constricted into renditionthis prison
forcin' me to listen to the demented
invented reflections of the repented
resented for sadistic intentions, manifestin' infections

{Burly's Verse 2}

Scars effect precedence
regrettably embedded heritance
I spread it through heretic narratives
Would you care to give some air to live
Expired from less fortunate lives
societal subordinate ties vital to coordinate crimes
all within my confines This breath the cause of death in an instant
the bane of existence for those with persistence
the reason why we're distant from our innocence
torment limitless, reborn into remanence
imminence of war, formed from its dependants
Torn from adolescence by the dawn of a resonance
spawned in dimensions of the legends
wreckless Bludgeon foes with a spoken sentence
6th sense witnessed a living dead existence
all physical diminishes your contingence malicious
the sickness the entrance infectious hate delicious
when you taste the vengeance

{DeX's Verse 2}

Forces generatin' a pain
creatin' hate for the psychotically insane
dislocatin' this strain livin' in vain distaste
settlin' in spaces of disgrace entangled in contraints
to masticate what's left of my life
the gates of theft relyin' on these lies
enticed by cries of poltergeists
disguised as my vicious malignance, developin'
feelin's of malevolance towards maliciousness
pernicious to the mischief of reason
ceasin' feelin's bringin' treason feedin' on
the greed that eats him, concedin' these lesions
releasin' a barrage of mirages a montage of assumptions
the resumption of eruptions causin' nothin' but destruction
this is where I cease to function the productions
creatin' spontaneous combustions
contained within conductions of reluctance
only to suffer the repercussions

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Average Score: 9.9 / 10

Score: 10
nielsss0

"good job"

date: 4 hours ago

the intro is really great, nothing bad to say about it
the rapping was great, evrything was great.
that's why this deserves the 10

greetzz

4 hours ago

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Thank you. We appreciate the love and support that we get from everyone that listens to this track. Stay up.

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Score: 10
Sintos

"DAMN BRO"

by: Sintos
date: December 3, 2009

Hey, safe man, i've been listing to this track for 5 hours man, this is insanity, truely amazing bro, just been listening to your tracks all day bro, no contest, downloaded, safe bro, keep it real, your lyrics have meaning, i like that, not like half of lil wayne's tracks, although he is pretty sick, nah man, this is on a different level, never stop man, you should be selling this man, your lyrics reach out to the heavens man, anyone can listen to this and love it man, safe, keep making tracks man, i got a 2 gig ipod bro, fill it :P
safe !!

4 hours ago

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Thanks a lot for the review and comments. Glad that you enjoyed it as much as we enjoyed making it, stay up.

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Score: 10
shaggyhaired

"Yessss."

date: December 3, 2009

This is what I like to see.

Good beats, meaningful lyrics. Thanks for not pushing the shit that is mainstream.

I'm big into making Ol'Skool beats.

You should check them out, I'd value an opinion from people as talented as you guys.

Keep it up!

4 hours ago

Author's Response:

Real Hip-Hop remains underground and it'll stay here because mainstream is only used for promoting club music. I'll be sure to check out your beats, thanks for dropping a review, stay up.

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Score: 10
TeknoInferno

"I don't usually like hip hop..."

date: December 2, 2009

but I really liked this song - much better than most of the stuff you can hear on radio nowadays. You did an awesome job!

December 2, 2009

Author's Response:

It's amazing how many people actually don't listen to hip-hop but that's the fault of mainstream hip-hop which strays from the essence of what it's supposed to be. Thanks for taking the time and listening to this track, this is real hip-hop. Stay up.

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Score: 10
EnigmaRequiem

"real hip hop."

date: November 22, 2009

this is real hip hop. its a real shame mainstream hip hop is nowhere near as good or inspirational. this is truly the best ive ever heard. great job guys and keep up the good work. you guys are lyrical geniuses

November 23, 2009

Author's Response:

We're real flattered by your review man. Real Hip Hop is the movement that I like to rep to the fullest because it's what Burly and I represent and will until the day we die. Thanks for taking the time to drop a review, stay up.

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