Yea, Not A Sonata...

Next time you should be a little more careful with your titles. Some people get really mad for some reason, like the guy below me.

A sonata is a musical composition consisting of 3-4 movements. Each movement has different key signatures and ideas from the previous movements that have been altered in various ways. So it keeps the same ideas, but alters and adds/subtracts from them in many ways.

(I left a definition here because in your pm you asked me what a sonata is, so now you know.)

As a song, this is pretty boring at the moment. But you have some nice melody lines going on. And some interesting chords as well, which creates a little dissonance here and there. So the foundation for a song here is solid.

I would definitely add some more instruments. Then use some plug-ins like reverb and the such to give it some color.

The drums are pretty decent actually. The rhythms that is. They could be compressed a little a raised in the overall mix a smidge. But as the rhythms go, you did a nice job actually.

So yea, you should work on this some more. With the melody lines you have going on, I really think there is some potential in this. But as a final version, this is pretty lame. Lol

2/5 and 4/10 overall. Good start, but definitely not a good song if it is a final version. So go finish it! :-P

-Gravey-

It's not a sonata.

Try reading up on definitions before naming your songs, instead of just sounding like you know what you're talk about... that came across like I'm an smug asshole.. I'm not.. sorry.

It's nice, but it feels like you've just tried to drag out the piece too long. If you're going to make something when you're bored, try putting a bit of effort into it instead of just shoving together a 4 minute long snoozefest.
When I'm bored, I make shorts, and I make them good. I no longer feel bored.